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학생이 쓴 원문
Seollal is the first day of lunar year.
So people gather in one place to pray their luck and celebrate their ages get one year.
We have many traditional play on seollal.
Every game should be joined together.
Just like cooperation competition.
Most of all seollal is a day people bow to the oldest of family member and the older give them luckymoney and eat dduck guk food together.
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [이름]ny for this!
I appreciate the information you wrote here about how you celebrate Seollal. it looks fun and it establishes your relationship. How about the young people? sadly in the Philippines, (not all) most young people even if they are in a gathering, are still looking down at their phones instead of mingling with other relatives.
Have a good day!
Aki~
Seollal is the first day of lunar year.
>>> Seollal is the first day of the Lunar New Year.
So people gather in one place to pray their luck and celebrate their ages get one year.
>>> So people gather in one place to pray for their luck and celebrate their lives getting another year in life.
We have many traditional play on seollal.
>>> We have many traditional games on Seollal.
Every game should be joined together.
>>> And everyone should participate in that game
Just like cooperation competition.
>>> Just like a healthy competition.
Most of all seollal is a day people bow to the oldest of family member and the older give them luckymoney and eat dduck guk food together.
>>> Most of all Seollal is a day people bow to the oldest of the family members and the older give them lucky money and eat rice cake together.
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