Homework
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Q: When should a person be allowed to access books that are considered inappropriate?
A: I think it depends on the person.
Every people grows differently, and the time when they have their philosophy in their mind is also different, so when they are mature enough to read those books and not be distracted by those books, it\'s okay to read them.
I think the time is really important because just doing something wrong, can absolutely change his life.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. Every people grows differently, and the time when they have their philosophy in their mind is also different, so when they are mature enough to read those books and not be distracted by those books, it\'s okay to read them.
3. I think the time is really important because just doing something wrong, can absolutely change his life.
Thank you for doing your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes to remember:
1. I think it depends on the person.
>>CORRECT!
2. Every people grows differently, and the time when they have their philosophy in their mind is also different, so when they are mature enough to read those books and not be distracted by those books, it\'s okay to read them.
>>Every person grows differently, and the time when they develop their philosophy in mind is also different. So, when they are mature enough to read those books and not be distracted by them, it\'s okay to read them.
3. I think the time is really important because just doing something wrong, can absolutely change his life.
>> I think time is really important because doing something wrong can absolutely change a person\'s life.
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