Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
On weekend
I usually spend with time for take a rest. But in now everyday is break for me. So I want to try something activity. I think it is good what spend with time in my home, but that make us to lazy and helplessly.
Therefore If I could change one thing, I would to challenge new experience that I never try before like hiking or other activity.
강사 첨삭
With your right mindset, I believe you can make it Damian! I am glad that you write your thoughts clearly. Keep it up!-Faith-
On weekend I usually spend with time for take a rest. >> On weekends, I usually spend my time resting.
But in now everyday is break for me. So I want to try something activity.
>> However, now that every day feels like a break for me, I want to try a new activity.
I think it is good what spend with time in my home, but that make us to lazy and helplessly.
>> I think it is good to spend my time in my home, but that makes me lazy and helpless.
Therefore If I could change one thing, I would to challenge new experience that I never try before like hiking or other activity.
Therefore If I could change one thing, I would to challenge new experience that I never try before like hiking or other activity.
>> Therefore, If I could change one thing, I would like to challenge myself with a new experience that I have never tried before such as hiking.
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