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Usually I don\'t have a lot of questions.
But when I curious about how i can benefit from it I searched that on the internet.
For example, If I wondering about the company’s results in my stock or What I need to working holiday.
So these days I search something offten.
강사 첨삭
Hi Su, I also use the internet to search for answers. Thank you for writing your composition. Great job! :)
But when I curious about how i can benefit from it I searched that on the internet.
For example, If I wondering about the company’s results in my stock or What I need to working holiday.
T.JAMIE
Usually I don\'t have a lot of questions.
>>CORRECT
OR >> I typically don\'t have many questions.
OR >> I typically don\'t have many questions.
But when I curious about how i can benefit from it I searched that on the internet.
>>But when I\'m curious about how I can benefit from it, I search it on the internet.
For example, If I wondering about the company’s results in my stock or What I need to working holiday.
>>For example, if I\'m curious about the company\'s results in my stock or what I need for a working holiday.
So these days I search something offten.
>>So these days, I often search for things.
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