homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) I've got something in my eye.
2) There is someone at the door.
3) We haven't heard anything about Peter. Is he ill?
4) Do you live anywhere near Mandy?
5) Someone wants to see you.
I have a dream to work at the national library.
There are The National Library of Korea and National Assembly Library in the representative library.
Everyone who majors in the Library and Information science has the dream like me.
Actually, I applied to the recruit test at the national library in several time.
I've always failed so I still worked at my now work.
It's one of reasons why I want to work there not to satisfy my work now.
I really want to move my work.
My work doesn't give me enough salary and doesn't manage systmeatic.
Most of all, I'm not able to advance more.
I want to know my job more well but it's no chance here.
Now new national library is building.
Maybe that will have a recruitment.
I will try to challenge again.
강사 첨삭
Hello my dear Miss. [Name],
Two thumbs up once again to a job well done!
You always answer you homework correctly..
And about your dream, just keep on trying. I know in no time, you will achieve that goal and get what you want..
Just be positive and keep on believing Miss. [Name].. You know I\'m always here to support you..:)
Talk to you again later Miss. [Name]..
Teacher Cam^^
1) I\'ve got something in my eye. >>correct2) There is someone at the door. >>correct3) We haven\'t heard anything about Peter. Is he ill? >>correct4) Do you live anywhere near Mandy? >>correct5) Someone wants to see you.>>correctI have a dream to work at the national library.
>>correct
>>I dream to work in the National Library.There are The National Library of Korea and National Assembly Library in the representative library.
>>correctEveryone who majors in the Library and Information science has the dream like me.
>>correctActually, I applied to the recruit test at the national library in several time.
>>Actually I already applied at the National Library several times.I\'ve always failed so I still worked at my now work.
>>I always fail so I still work in the library until now.
It\'s one of reasons why I want to work there not to satisfy my work now.
>>One of the reasons why I wanna work there is because I\'m not satisfied with my job right now.I really want to move my work.
>>I really want to improve my job.My work doesn\'t give me enough salary and doesn\'t manage systmeatic.
>>My work doesn\'t give me enough salary and the management is not systematic.Most of all, I\'m not able to advance more.
>>Most of all, I\'m not able to improve myself more.I want to know my job more well but it\'s no chance here.
>>I want to know my job more but I have no chance.Now new national library is building.
>>And now they are building a new national library.Maybe that will have a recruitment.
>>Maybe they will recruit again.
>>Maybe they will accept some applicants again.I will try to challenge again.
>>I will try to apply again..^^
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