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I think students don\'t need to do household chores. But they have to study and do their schoolwork hard.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Henry!
While focusing on schoolwork is indeed crucial for academic success, it\'s also important for students to learn valuable life skills through household chores. Balancing both responsibilities can help them develop a well-rounded set of skills and habits that will serve them well in the future.
~ Teacher Maxine
I think students don\'t need to do household chores.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I think students shouldn\'t have to do household chores.
But they have to study and do their school work hard.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> However, they must dedicate themselves to studying and diligently completing their school assignments.
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