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학생이 쓴 원문
Usually, I like to buy online. because when I bought somethings I just need a phone than choose stuff.
So most of my clothes were bought online. and besides These days most peoples were use ‘Carrot market’. Carrot market is used article applications. I just setting near my house of location in app, than I can see what the neighbors are selling.
like furniture, home appliances or photo cards of some boy group.
So many stuffs were upload and many peoples regardless of age use the app than me too.
Recently I wanted change mood of my room. So I bought dressing table and I’ve sold table and blind.
And I go to the store and buy somethings that touches my body after experiencing it. Like clothes and earphones..
강사 첨삭
Hi Su! Thank you for submitting your composition. I also enjoy ordering items online because of the convenience it offers. Please find the corrections below. Let me know if you have any questions.
So most of my clothes were bought online. and besides These days most peoples were use ‘Carrot market’.
-T.JAMIE
Usually, I like to buy online. because when I bought somethings I just need a phone than choose stuff.
>>Usually, I prefer to buy online because when I purchase something, I only need a phone to choose items.
So most of my clothes were bought online. and besides These days most peoples were use ‘Carrot market’.
>> So most of my clothes were bought online, and besides, these days most people use \'Carrot Market\'.
Carrot market is used article applications.
>> Carrot Market is an application used for buying and selling various items.
I just setting near my house of location in app, than I can see what the neighbors are selling. like furniture, home appliances or photo cards of some boy group.
>> I just set my location near my house in the app, and then I can see what the neighbors are selling, such as furniture, home appliances, or photo cards of some boy group.
So many stuffs were upload and many peoples regardless of age use the app than me too.
>>So many items are uploaded, and people of all ages use the app, including myself.
Recently I wanted change mood of my room. So I bought dressing table and I’ve sold table and blind.
>> Recently, I wanted to change the mood of my room. So, I bought a dressing table and sold the old table and blinds.
And I go to the store and buy somethings that touches my body after experiencing it. Like clothes and earphones..
>> And I go to the store to buy things that I want to physically touch and experience before purchasing, such as clothes and earphones.
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