Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I prepared a surprise birthday party on my husband\'s birthday last year. Usually, on my family\'s birthday, I ate delicious food with my family and prepared gifts. However, on my husband\'s birthday last year, I prepared a birthday balloon decoration, cake, and a letter.
My husband was happy to see the balloon decoration in the living room. I was also happy because my husband was happy. I think it\'s more meaningful when I give a gift from someone. Giving happiness to someone makes me happy.
강사 첨삭
You were able to share how you celebrate birthdays in your family. Job well done, Mia! ^^ Indeed, we feel happy when we make others happy. ^^
-Khai
I prepared a surprise birthday party on my husband\'s birthday last year.
>> I prepared a surprise birthday party for my husband\'s birthday last year.
Usually, on my family\'s birthday, I ate delicious food with my family and prepared gifts.
>> Usually, on my family\'s birthday, I eat delicious food with my family and prepare gifts.
However, on my husband\'s birthday last year, I prepared a birthday balloon decoration, cake, and a letter.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> I prepared a birthday balloon decoration, cake, and a letter for my husband’s birthday last year.
My husband was happy to see the balloon decoration in the living room.>> CORRECT
OR
>> My husband was surprised and happy to see the balloon decoration in the living room.
I was also happy because my husband was happy.
>> CORRECT
I think it\'s more meaningful when I give a gift from someone.
>> I think it\'s more meaningful when I give a gift to someone.
Giving happiness to someone makes me happy.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> It makes me happy when I am able to make others happy.
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