Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
There are many things we can share in our lives with different people. I share each other\'s needs and interests. I share my favorite sports, hobbies, and places I went on a trip. Then, through each other\'s common interests, we can better understand each other, spend time together, and have new experiences. On the other hand, I don\'t share all social media. Because I\'m concerned about privacy being exposed.
강사 첨삭
Thank you so much for writing your homework, Mia. We\'re the same as I also don\'t share all the things that are happening to me on social media due to privacy reasons. ^^
-Khai
There are many things we can share in our lives with different people.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> We can share many things in our lives with different people.
I share each other\'s needs and interests.
>> I share my needs and interests with other people.
I share my favorite sports, hobbies, and places I went on a trip.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> I share my favorite sports, hobbies, and travel experiences.
Then, through each other\'s common interests, we can better understand each other, spend time together, and have new experiences.
>> CORRECT
On the other hand, I don\'t share all social media.
>> On the other hand, I don\'t share all the things happening to me on social media.
Because I\'m concerned about privacy being exposed.
>> I’m concerned about my privacy being exposed.
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