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Q: Which do you think is harder, studying or working? Why?
A: I think working would be harder.
Actually, it depends because there are a lot of types of works, but usually when people work, they both use their brain and their body while they only use their brain when they\'re studying.
Still I think studying is not a easy thing to do.
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2. Actually, it depends because there are a lot of types of works, but usually when people work, they both use their brain and their body while they only use their brain when they\'re studying.
3. Still I think studying is not a easy thing to do.
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Here are some notes to consider:
1. I think working would be harder.
>>CORRECT!
2. Actually, it depends because there are a lot of types of works, but usually when people work, they both use their brain and their body while they only use their brain when they\'re studying.
>>It actually depends on the type of work, because when people work, they both use their brain and their body, while they only use their brain when they\'re studying.
3. Still I think studying is not a easy thing to do.
>>However, I still think studying is not an easy thing to do.
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