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Benefits of using a planner
1. If you write a planner, you can see the priorities of your work, so you can finish what you need to do.
2. You can feel a sense of accomplishment while checking the progress.
3. You can set and plan your personal goals.
4. Looking at the planner I\'ve recorded in the past, I can check what I\'ve done right and what I\'ve done wrong, and I can improve for the better.
5. You can see how I spent my day. Also, I can manage my time efficiently.
6. It is helpful in filling up the amount of study.
강사 첨삭
You have listed meaningful benefits, Mia! ^^ Very good! ^^ Indeed, the planner helps us in a lot of ways. ^^
-Khai
Benefits of using a planner
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
1. If you write a planner, you can see the priorities of your work, so you can finish what you need to do.
>> CORRECT
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>> If you have a planner, you can see the priorities of your work, so you can finish what you need to do.
2. You can feel a sense of accomplishment while checking the progress.>> CORRECT
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>> You’ll feel fulfilled as you check your progress.
3. You can set and plan your personal goals.>> CORRECT
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>> You can make a plan and list your personal goals.
4. Looking at the planner I\'ve recorded in the past, I can check what I\'ve done right and what I\'ve done wrong, and I can improve for the better.>> CORRECT
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>> I’ve taken a look at the planner I had in the past. I was able to see my past accomplishments and past mistakes. These will help me strive to become better.
5. You can see how I spent my day.>> CORRECT
Also, I can manage my time efficiently.
>> CORRECT
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>> Also, I can manage my time efficiently and become productive.
6. It is helpful in filling up the amount of study.>> It is helpful in my studies too.
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