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Q: Why do you think some jobs pay more than others?
A: I think it\'s because those jobs are more important for humans.
Also, I think another major reason is because some jobs are trending, or their productions are trending so a lot of people consume them.
I think most of jobs are treated well, but some jobs are not.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. Also, I think another major reason is because some jobs are trending, or their productions are trending so a lot of people consume them.
3. I think most of jobs are treated well, but some jobs are not.
Thank you for answering your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to consider:
1. I think it\'s because those jobs are more important for humans.
>>CORRECT!
2. Also, I think another major reason is because some jobs are trending, or their productions are trending so a lot of people consume them.
>>Also, I think another major reason is because some jobs are trending or their productions are trending, so a lot of people consume them.
3. I think most of jobs are treated well, but some jobs are not.
>>CORRECT!
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