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2024-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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I think I\'m going to take my money because when I see it. I suddenly pick it up without realizing it. But I think I\'ll regret it because I didn\'t pick it up at home.

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Here\'s another corrected composition, Luna. 
Many thanks as always for sending your homework. See you on Friday! 

Cheers,
Jean~~





                   What will you do if you find a small amount of cash on the road but don\'t know who owns the money? Why?



I think I\'m going to take my money because when I see it.
I suddenly pick it up without realizing it.
>> I think I\'m going to take the money because I\'d pick it up without realizing it when I see the amount on the road. 

But I think I\'ll regret it because I didn\'t pick it up at home.
>> But I\'d probably regret it because I just found the money, which means it wasn\'t mine. 

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