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학생이 쓴 원문
People are satisfied with their life when they
feel successful.
If I choose my job or hobby sometimes it can be a person. I think I have to do my best.
Working hard is important regardless of success or result.
Such that life can make me happy and I won’t regret to my life.
강사 첨삭
Great day, Ms. [이름]ny!
We all have ways to become successful, we need to work on our own to achieve our goal. Don\'t try using the ruler of success of the other person.
Have a good day!
Aki~
People are satisfied with their life when they feel successful.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> Accomplishment and success make people satisfied with their lives.
If I choose my job or hobby sometimes it can be a person.
>>> Whenever I choose my job or hobby there is the influence of another person.
I think I have to do my best.
>>> CORRECT!
Working hard is important regardless of success or result.
>>> Working hard is important regardless of the result.
Such that life can make me happy and I won’t regret to my life.
>>> Such life can make me happy with no regrets.
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