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Two important things that I prepare for work.
First, you have to be on time to go to work. You should not be late.
Being on time for work is an appointment with me and the company, and it is a basic element of self-regulation.
Second, steady self-care
I personally want to be a person who constantly strives, even if it\'s not perfect.
강사 첨삭
You have shared essential things that you prepare for work, Mia. ^^ You have constructed meaningful sentences. Job well done! ^^
-Khai
Two important things that I prepare for work.
>> There are two important things that I need to prepare for work.
First, you have to be on time to go to work.>> CORRECT
You should not be late.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> You should not be tardy.
Being on time for work is an appointment with me and the company, and it is a basic element of self-regulation.>> CORRECT
OR
>> Being on time for work is my responsibility in the company. It is a basic rule that everyone should follow.
Second, steady self-care>> Second, it is steady self-care.
I personally want to be a person who constantly strives, even if it\'s not perfect.>> CORRECT
OR
>> I want to be a person who constantly strives, even if there are flaws or mistakes.
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