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2024-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Divina

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Q: What do you think a person would feel if he/she gets laid off from work, to be replaced with robots? A: I think that person won\'t feel very nice. Because it means that a robot is better than that person, or a robot can work better than that person, so he/she will feel incompetent. But I think it can also be a good chance to find that person\'s talent and have a better life.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for answering your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes to remember:

1. I think that person won\'t feel very nice.
>>CORRECT!

2. Because it means that a robot is better than that person, or a robot can work better than that person, so he/she will feel incompetent.
>>It means that a robot is better or can work better than that person, so he/she will feel incompetent.

3. But I think it can also be a good chance to find that person\'s talent and have a better life.
>>However, I think it can also be a good chance to find that person\'s talent and have a better life.

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