Homework
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HOMEWORK FOR 02/16:
Writing Task: When you are hiking, do you prefer staying overnight outdoor in a tent or do you book sleeping in a cottage?
I would say I like both of them . When I went to the Jeju island for hiking last summer, I stayed 2 nights of outdoor in a tent and slept one night in a cottage.
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I would say I like both of them.
>> Correct.
When I went to the Jeju island for hiking last summer, I stayed 2 nights of outdoor in a tent and slept one night in a cottage.
>> When I went to Jeju Island for hiking last summer, I stayed two nights outdoor in a tent and slept one night in a cottage.
Or >> I spent two nights outside in a tent and one night in a cottage when I hiked in Jeju Island last summer.
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