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I think success has something to do with luck. But luck isn\'t the only factor in success. Luck can provide an opportunity for success, but it depends on an individual\'s effort and ability to seize it and lead it to success. There is a saying, \"Heaven helps those who help hemselves.\"
It means that if you don\'t try, luck from heaven will never come. Nothing changes if nothing is done. For example, a person who regularly buys a lottery ticket is given a chance to win.If you don\'t buy a lottery ticket and don\'t take any action, you won\'t be lucky.
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Well said, Ms. [Name]!
We cannot just depend on our success to luck. We must do our part in able to attain something. ^^ Do your best and heaven will do the rest
Chammy
I think success has something to do with luck.
But luck isn\'t the only factor in success.
Luck can provide an opportunity for success, but it depends on an individual\'s effort and ability to seize it and lead it to success.
There is a saying, \"Heaven helps those who help hemselves.\"
>> There is a saying, \"Heaven helps those who help themselves.\"
It means that if you don\'t try, luck from heaven will never come.
Nothing changes if nothing is done. For example, a person who regularly buys a lottery ticket is given a chance to win. If you don\'t buy a lottery ticket and don\'t take any action, you won\'t be lucky.
>>Correct
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