Homework
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Q: What are some good and bad points about social networking?
A: I think some good points of social networking is people can communicate more convenient when they\'re far away.
Also, I think another good point of social networking is that they can meet vary people online, and be friends with them.
And I think the bad point of it is there are some predators online, so they should be careful.
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2. Also, I think another good point of social networking is that they can meet vary people online, and be friends with them.
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Here are some things to consider:
1. I think some good points of social networking is people can communicate more convenient when they\'re far away.
>>I think one good point of social networking is people can communicate more conveniently even when they\'re far away.
2. Also, I think another good point of social networking is that they can meet vary people online, and be friends with them.
>>Also, I think another good point of social networking is that they can meet various people online and be friends with them.
3. And I think the bad point of it is there are some predators online, so they should be careful.
>>I think the bad point of it is there are some predators online, so they should be careful.
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