Homework
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HOMEWORK:
When will you know that you are ready for marriage?
I\'m strongly sure about that I\'m not ready for marriage now, because I\'m still young and I haven\'t set up yet all the independent foundation about reality, society, finance, mind. Actually, getting marriage is based on love between lovers and it could be enough each others. But in my perspective, there is no any disadvantage setting up these things. I\'m a quite futuristic person, so I hope making a happy and stable family in the far future, not only financial stability, but mind stability as well. Independence in a various way might be really helpful making happy family. When I set up all of these things, it means I\'m ready for marriage. I\'m not sure about how long it\'s going to take. I hope I could set up every these things before the middle age of thirty.
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I\'m strongly sure about that I\'m not ready for marriage now, because I\'m still young and I haven\'t set up yet all the independent foundation about reality, society, finance, mind. Actually, getting marriage is based on love between lovers and it could be enough each others.
>>> I\'m strongly sure that I\'m not ready for marriage now, because I\'m still young and I haven\'t set up yet all the independent foundation about reality, society, finance, mind. Getting married is based on love between lovers and it could be enough for each other.
But in my perspective, there is no any disadvantage setting up these things. I\'m a quite futuristic person, so I hope making a happy and stable family in the far future, not only financial stability, but mind stability as well.
>>> But in my perspective, there is no disadvantage in setting up these things. I\'m a quite futuristic person, so I hope to make a happy and stable family in the far future, not only financial stability but mind stability as well.
Independence in a various way might be really helpful making happy family.
>>> Independence in a various way might help make a happy family.
When I set up all of these things, it means I\'m ready for marriage.
>>> CORRECT!
I\'m not sure about how long it\'s going to take.
>>> CORRECT!
I hope I could set up every these things before the middle age of thirty.
>>> I hope I can set up all these things before the middle age of thirty
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