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I agree with Lucas\' opinon. The person who live alone had better have a pet because if the person has a pet they may not feel lonely and a ppet can be family. They can rest togeter
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Hello, Henry!
You made a great point. Having a pet can make a big difference in reducing feelings of loneliness.
~ Teacher Maxine :)
I agree with Lucas\' opinon.
>> I agree with Lucas\' opinion.
The person who live alone had better have a pet because if the person has a pet they may not feel lonely and a ppet can be family.
>> The person who lives alone had better have a pet because if they have one, they may not feel lonely, and a pet can become family.
They can rest togeter
>> They can rest together.
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