Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
A pet can be family and both people and a pet can rest togeter.But people don\'t take care of well they can be very tired.
Every home don\'t have to have a pet but if they live alone or the couple who don\'t have baby they had better have a pet.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Henry!
Pets can indeed become like family, and it\'s lovely how both people and pets can find comfort in each other\'s company. However, you\'re right that taking care of a pet requires responsibility, and it can be exhausting if not done properly. While not every home needs a pet, for those who live alone or are a childless couple, having a pet can bring companionship and joy.
~ Teacher Maxine
A pet can be family and both people and a pet can rest togeter.But people don\'t take care of well they can be very tired.
>> A pet can be part of the family, and both people and a pet can rest together. However, if people don\'t take good care of their pet, they can become very tired.
Every home don\'t have to have a pet but if they live alone or the couple who don\'t have baby they had better have a pet.
>> Not every home has to have a pet, but for those who live alone or couples without children, having a pet is often beneficial.
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