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What if i receive a defective product that i bought online, i will try to calling to manager of the store. And i will explain that what it happened.Finally, I will request the refund.
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Hello, Peter!
That sounds like a good plan. Contacting the store manager and explaining the situation is the right step to take.
~ Teacher Maxine
What if i receive a defective product that i bought online,
>> What if I receive a defective product that I bought online?
i will try to calling to manager of the store. And i will explain that what it happened.
>> I will try calling the manager of the store and explain what happened.
Finally, I will request the refund.
>> Finally, I will request a refund.
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