Homework
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Q: How have smartphones changed over the years?
A: Functionally, it got more and more function by the time flew.
Of course, to make the phone more useful, they need to add more functions to the phone, so people can use them more.
And for the shape, the display of the phone got slimmer and wider
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2. Of course, to make the phone more useful, they need to add more functions to the phone, so people can use them more.
3. And for the shape, the display of the phone got slimmer and wider.
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Here are some notes to consider:
1. Functionally, it got more and more function by the time flew.
>>It got more functions as the time went by.
2. Of course, to make the phone more useful, they need to add more functions to the phone, so people can use them more.
>>Of course, to make the phone more useful, they need to add more functions to the phone so that people can use them in more ways.
3. And for the shape, the display of the phone got slimmer and wider.
>>As for the shape, the display of the phone got slimmer and wider.
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