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I have watched a live concert with my family once. It was very loud and very cool! I felt very good because I didn\'t go academy.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Henry!
That sounds like a memorable experience! Live concerts can be so energizing. It\'s great you got to enjoy it with your family. Taking a break from the academy must have felt refreshing.
~ Teacher Maxine
I have watched a live concert with my family once.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I watched a live concert with my family once.
It was very loud and very cool!
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It was incredibly loud and absolutely thrilling!
I felt very good because I didn\'t go academy.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I felt really good because I didn\'t have to go to the academy.
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