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I don’t know I am an impulsive shopper.
I usually go shopping to look around.
I buy clotheses at outlet that comes out last year.
So I often visit there because we don’t know when the pretty clothes is showed up at the shopping center.
That clotheses only be sold at the event place for 1week.
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Hello, Ms. [이름]ny!
Wow, you are very diligent to go and see for the latest clothes style. Thank you for sharing this.
Have a good afternoon!
Aki~
I usually go shopping to look around.
So I often visit there because we don’t know when the pretty clothes is showed up at the shopping center.
That clotheses only be sold at the event place for 1week.
I don’t know I am an impulsive shopper.
>>> I don’t know whether I am an impulsive shopper.
I usually go shopping to look around.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> I only do window shopping.
I buy clotheses at outlet that comes out last year.
>>> I bought clothes from an outlet that came out last year.
So I often visit there because we don’t know when the pretty clothes is showed up at the shopping center.
>>> So I often visit there because we don’t know when the pretty clothes will be displayed at the shopping center.
That clotheses only be sold at the event place for 1week.
>>> Those clothes will only be sold at an event for a week.
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