Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. The places I visited recently, Gyeongju was very good.
2. Gyeongju has Gyeongju World, Daeneungwon, and Cheomseongdae several historical cultural properties, and it is a good place to visit at least once because you can enjoy various things.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ji [이름]!
Gyeongju sounds like a fascinating destination with its mix of historical sites and modern attractions.
~ Teacher Maxine
The places I visited recently, Gyeongju was very good.
>> I recently visited Gyeongju, and I found it to be a wonderful destination.
Gyeongju has Gyeongju World, Daeneungwon, and Cheomseongdae several historical cultural properties, and it is a good place to visit at least once because you can enjoy various things.
>> Gyeongju boasts several historical and cultural attractions such as Gyeongju World, Daeneungwon, and Cheomseongdae. It is a fantastic destination to visit at least once, offering a variety of experiences to enjoy.
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