Homework
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Q: How do you make sure that your personal information will not be taken by other people on the internet?
A: I can\'t be sure because I\'m not an expert of the internet, but I just always doubt if my phone is hacked or not.
Usually when the gadgets are hacked, there are some visual differences on the screen, so I can know immediately.
And I also install some vaccine programs, so I can prevent virus and I just get test continuously.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. Usually when the gadgets are hacked, there are some visual differences on the screen, so I can know immediately.
3. And I also install some vaccine programs, so I can prevent virus and I just get test continuously.
Thank you for answering your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes to consider:
1. I can\'t be sure because I\'m not an expert of the internet, but I just always doubt if my phone is hacked or not.
>>I can\'t be sure because I\'m not an expert of the internet, but I always doubt if my phone is hacked or not.
2. Usually when the gadgets are hacked, there are some visual differences on the screen, so I can know immediately.
>>CORRECT!
3. And I also install some vaccine programs, so I can prevent virus and I just get test continuously.
>>I also install some vaccine programs so I can stop the virus from taking over and I just test my phone continuously.
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