Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I put a photo
강사 첨삭
[이름]!
Gee.. I\'ve noticed that you are enjoying writing these days! I appreciate all your effort in doing your homework. Keep writing while having fun!
T. Aki~
At this time, I think about writing my diary.
>> CORRECT!
Writing down our life is wonderful.
>> Writing down our lives is wonderful.
The thing is a lot of people don\'t write a diary included me because it\'s a hassle and they think they don\'t have to make diary.
>> The thing is a lot of people don\'t write a diary including me because it\'s a hassle and they think they don\'t have to make a diary.
So I imagine what if the AI system help us writing down our diary? In short, AI system could analyze our daily life and how do we think about today by app.
>> So I imagine what if the AI system helps us write down our diary? In short, AI systems could analyze our daily lives and how we think about today by the app.
For example, we don\'t memorize all the details what we\'ve done today.
>> For example, we don\'t memorize all the details of what we\'ve done today.
AI could check the details what we\'ve done, where we\'ve been by app from location system. conversation in SNS or reality, photos that we took.
>> >> CORRECT!
Not only analyzing daily life what we\'ve done today but asking about our view from conversation, articles that we\'ve seen., issues about today.
>> Not only analyzing daily life and what we\'ve done today but asking about our view from the conversation, articles that we\'ve seen., and issues about today.
Nowadays, most people bring their self phone all day, so it\'s a quite feasible plan that is making analyzing day life system on AI.
>> Nowadays, most people bring their cellphones all day, so it\'s a quite feasible plan that is making analyzing day life systems on AI.
It starts from the end of the day.
>> It starts at the end of the day.
It goes with summarizing a day what I\'ve done and asking about how do I feel today and do I think about something_ getting dome views.
>> It goes with summarizing about my day and asking about how I feel today and do I think about something_ getting dome views.
It could be typing or having a conversation with AI, after then, AI fill out our diary.
>> It could be typing or having a conversation with AI, after that, AI fills out our diary.
Of course, we can revise it and as time goes on with this app, AI could write well a diary what we want exactly.
>> Of course, we can revise it and as time goes on with this app, AI could write well a diary of what we want exactly.
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