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Q: What should happen to companies that test animals in a cruel way?
A: I think for those companies where test animals in a bad way or with no purpose, they need to be punished.
Even though a lot of companies do the animal testings and people allow them, animals are lives and they shouldn\'t be treated bad because usually, animal testings are allowed only when it\'s really necessary for people.
So, I think if that happens, the people who planed animals testing and who did the animal testing should be punished.
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2. Even though a lot of companies do the animal testings and people allow them, animals are lives and they shouldn\'t be treated bad because usually, animal testings are allowed only when it\'s really necessary for people.
3. So, I think if that happens, the people who planed animals testing and who did the animal testing should be punished.
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Here are some notes:
1. I think for those companies where test animals in a bad way or with no purpose, they need to be punished.
>> I think for those companies that test animals in a bad way or with no purpose, they need to be punished.
2. Even though a lot of companies do the animal testings and people allow them, animals are lives and they shouldn\'t be treated bad because usually, animal testings are allowed only when it\'s really necessary for people.
>>Even though a lot of companies do the animal testing and people allow them, animals are lives and they shouldn\'t be treated bad because usually, animal testing is allowed only when it\'s really necessary for people.
3. So, I think if that happens, the people who planed animals testing and who did the animal testing should be punished.
>>So, I think if that happens, the people who planned and did the animal testing should be punished.
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