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2024-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Maxine

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Even if you got a bad score it\'s commendable if you study hard 2. People want to buy practical a prodution. 3. I save up money to buy cube. 4. The student try to enhance their physical. 5. They recognized their phones were stolen. 6. I exert to do my homework in time. 7. The place is exposed to the rain.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Henry! Great job on these sentences. Please review the corrections.
~ Teacher Maxine

Even if you got a bad score it\'s commendable if you study hard
>> Even if you got a bad score, it\'s commendable if you studied hard.

People want to buy practical a prodution.
>> People want to buy practical products.

I save up money to buy cube.
>> I saved up money to buy a cube.

The student try to enhance their physical.
>> The students try to enhance their physical fitness.

They recognized their phones were stolen.
>> They realized their phones were stolen.
OR >> They recognized that their phones had been stolen.

I exert to do my homework in time.
>> I strive to do my homework on time.
OR >> I exert myself to ensure that I complete my homework punctually.

The place is exposed to the rain.
>> The place is exposed to the rain.

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