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2012-04-19 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) We need some bananas. 2) You can't buy any posters in this shop. 3) We haven't got any oranges at the moment. 4) Peter has bought some new books. 5) She always takes some sugar with her coffee. I'm considering what I do this weekend. I want to take a rest but I must do someting. I couldn't attend a mass last Sunday because I was in bed with cold. I must confess to the priest. Korean Catholic think it is very big sin not to go to mass even one week. We should confess if we don't go to mass. However, We often don't confess. Perhaps, we are necessarily confess by absenting a mass. By the way, I have to confess. But I can't confess in my area. Because most priest in my area know my voice and who I am. I work in the place related Catholic, my sin is something related them. So I used to go to Seoul for confessing. This is a real hassle. So I consider whether to go to confess or to commit a sin continually.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name], job well done again for making your homework! I alwys appreciate you making your homework and studying ahead of time.. keep up the good work my dear! And about the thing that you will be doing this weekend, if you really want to have your confession my dear, just do it..:) And the rest, we will talk about them in our class.. Teacher Cam^^ 1) We need some bananas. >>correct2) You can\'t buy any posters in this shop. >>correct3) We haven\'t got any oranges at the moment. >>correct4) Peter has bought some new books. >>correct5) She always takes some sugar with her coffee.>>correctI\'m considering what I do this weekend. >>I\'m thinking of what i will do this weekend.I want to take a rest but I must do someting. >>correctI couldn\'t attend a mass last Sunday because I was in bed with cold. >>correctI must confess to the priest. >>correctKorean Catholic think it is very big sin not to go to mass even one week. >>Korean Catholic people think it is a very big sin not to go to a mass in a week.We should confess if we don\'t go to mass. >>correctHowever, We often don\'t confess. >>correctPerhaps, we are necessarily confess by absenting a mass. >>Perhaps we necessarily confess by not attending the mass.By the way, I have to confess. >>correctBut I can\'t confess in my area. >>correct Because most priest in my area know my voice and who I am. >>correctI work in the place related Catholic, my sin is something related them. >>I work in a related place catholic and my sin is somewhat related to them.So I used to go to Seoul for confessing. >>So I used to go to Seoul to confess. This is a real hassle. >>correctSo I consider whether to go to confess or to commit a sin continually. >>So I conside whther to have my confession or to commit sins continously.

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