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I think that all festival is meaningful someone.
but some problem was issued from local area by news.
Most price was higher than other place.
Since it is a festival to promote the region, it seems that selling items at high prices should be avoided.
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Hi [이름]!
I like the last part of your sentence since I never thought about that. During festivals, it must be affordable for everyone to enjoy their products.
Thank you for this!
T. Aki~
I think that all festival is meaningful someone.
>>> I think that all festivals are meaningful to someone.
but some problem was issued from local area by news.
>>> but some problem was issued from the local area by news.
Most price was higher than other place.
>>> Most prices were higher than in other places.
Since it is a festival to promote the region, it seems that selling items at high prices should be avoided.
>>> CORRECT!
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