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2024-02-27 · 첨삭 강사 Khai

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Studying a foreign language is not necessarily required. But I think foreign languages are very helpful to live a better life. Even in Korea, it is a reality that people with foreign language skills are welcomed as good talents. Personally, I would like to recommend you to learn a foreign language. There is nothing to lose by studying a foreign language. If there are many languages I can speak, there will be a lot of information I get, and my way of looking at the world will change.

강사 첨삭

You have given meaningful answers, Mia. Indeed, our view of the world changes when we learn a new language.  ^^

-Khai

Studying a foreign language is not necessarily required. 

>> CORRECT

OR 

>> Studying a foreign language is not mandatory.

But I think foreign languages are very helpful to live a better life. 

>> But I think foreign languages are very helpful for us to live a better life.

Even in Korea, it is a reality that people with foreign language skills are welcomed as good talents. 

>> Even in Korea, if you have foreign language skills, you are considered a good talent.

Personally, I would like to recommend you to learn a foreign language. 

>> Personally, I would like to recommend that you learn a foreign language.

There is nothing to lose by studying a foreign language. 

There is nothing to lose by studying a foreign language. 

>> CORRECT

OR 

>> There is nothing to lose but more to gain when studying a foreign language.

If there are many languages I can speak, there will be a lot of information I get, and my way of looking at the world will change.

>> CORRECT


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