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Q: What can be done to some zoos that are still operating now?
A: I think it\'s not that bad to keep the existing animals, but I think catching or keeping more animals should be avoided.
I think most animals in the zoos now would be adapted to the zoos\' environment, so I think it\'s meaningless to free them.
So I think if they free those animals, than it would be hard for them to survive in the wild.
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Thank you for doing your homework.
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Here are some corrections:
1. I think it\'s not that bad to keep the existing animals, but I think catching or keeping more animals should be avoided.
>>I think it\'s not that bad to keep the existing animals, but catching or keeping more animals should be avoided.
2. I think most animals in the zoos now would be adapted to the zoos\' environment, so I think it\'s meaningless to free them.
>>I think most animals in the zoos now have adapted to the zoos\' environment, so I think it\'s meaningless to free them.
3. So I think if they free those animals, than it would be hard for them to survive in the wild.
>>If they free those animals, then it would be hard for them to survive in the wild.
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