homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello teacher
How are you today?
Did you rest a weekend well?
Homework
Why do people need hobbies?
My answer
They should have hobbies because they will be health
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] [이름]!
The weekend was quite busy for me but everything\'s good. I hope you had a great weekend, too!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes to consider:
1. They should have hobbies because they will be health
>>They should have hobbies so that they will be healthy.
2. Did you rest a weekend well?
>>Did you rest well during the weekend?
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