Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I agree with Jacob\'s opinion. Because almost student don\'t have time to do volunteer work at least student of middle school. They have to go academy to study.
2. I think student don\'t have to be repuired to do volunteer work but it has benefit for student. My opinion is school compare the students have to do volunteer work. Because for example studying is important but stuents don\'t like it, however it is repuired to students.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Henry!
Your point about the benefits of volunteer work for students is well taken. It\'s important to consider how schools can encourage participation in such activities without making it mandatory.
~ Teacher Maxine
I agree with Jacob\'s opinion. Because almost student don\'t have time to do volunteer work at least student of middle school.
>> I agree with Jacob\'s opinion because most students, especially those in middle school, don\'t have time to do volunteer work.
They have to go academy to study.
>> They have to go to the academy to study.
I think student don\'t have to be repuired to do volunteer work but it has benefit for student.
>> I think students shouldn\'t be required to do volunteer work, but it has benefits for them.
My opinion is school compare the students have to do volunteer work.
>> My opinion is schools should consider whether students have to do volunteer work.
Because for example studying is important but stuents don\'t like it, however it is repuired to students.
>> Because, for example, studying is important, but students may not like it, even though it is required.
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