Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
The neighborhood where I live is a convenient place to live. The subway station is nearby and there are many buses to Seoul. However, I hope my neighborhood is quiet and good air. Also, I think it would be better if there were many green spaces to take a walk. I like a house without pollution and noise in the city. Someday I want to move to a space where I can relax from the pollution and noise of the city center.
강사 첨삭
You were able to describe your ideal neighborhood, Mia. We’re the same. I also want a place free from noise and pollution. ^^
-Khai
The neighborhood where I live is a convenient place to live.
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The subway station is nearby and there are many buses to Seoul.
>> The subway station is nearby, and there are many buses to Seoul.
However, I hope my neighborhood is quiet and good air.
>> However, I hope my neighborhood is quiet and has fresh air.
Also, I think it would be better if there were many green spaces to take a walk.
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>> Also, I think it would be better if there were many green areas, such as parks, to take a walk.
I like a house without pollution and noise in the city.
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>> I like a house free from pollution and noise.
Someday I want to move to a space where I can relax from the pollution and noise of the city center.
>> CORRECT
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>> Someday, I want to move to a space where I can relax away from the pollution and noise of the city.
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