Homework
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Q: Where would you like to go on your next vacation? Why?
A: I don\'t actually have one in my mind, but I want to go to New Zealand sometime in my life.
It\'s because there are a lot of exotic animal species, and also, the seasons flow opposite to our country, so it would be a great experience for me.
Except there, I want to go somewhere clean, because I want to stay in a clean place.
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Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes to consider:
1. I don\'t actually have one in my mind, but I want to go to New Zealand sometime in my life.
>>I don\'t actually have one in mind, but I want to go to New Zealand some time in my life.
2. It\'s because there are a lot of exotic animal species, and also, the seasons flow opposite to our country, so it would be a great experience for me.
>>It\'s because there are a lot of exotic animal species there, and the seasons also flow opposing to our country, so it would be a great experience for me.
3. Except there, I want to go somewhere clean because I want to stay in a clean place.
>>CORRECT!
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