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I would be embarrassed when I notice that my parked bicycle is missing after buying what I need. But it can be found in a few ways.
First of all, you can track the location of a bicycle using a mobile phone. If you have a smart tag on your bicycle, you can track the location of the bicycle by running the Smart Sync app on your phone. Or call the police. Then the police can track the CCTV and catch it. There are a lot of CCTVs installed in our country. Wherever you go, there is no place without CCTV.
강사 첨삭
You were able to tell what you would do in case you lost your bicycle. Great work, Mia! ^^
-Khai
I would be embarrassed when I notice that my parked bicycle is missing after buying what I need.
>> I would be embarrassed if I noticed that my parked bicycle was missing after buying what I needed.
But it can be found in a few ways.
>> CORRECT
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>> However, a lost bicycle can be retrieved in some ways.
First of all, you can track the location of a bicycle using a mobile phone.>> CORRECT
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>> First, you can install a smart tag on your bicycle and track its location using your mobile phone.
If you have a smart tag on your bicycle, you can track the location of the bicycle by running the Smart Sync app on your phone.
>> CORRECT
Or call the police.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> Second, you can ask for help from the police.
Then the police can track the CCTV and catch it.
>> CORRECT
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>> The police can check the CCTV and find where it is.
There are a lot of CCTVs installed in our country.
>> CORRECT
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>> There are CCTVs installed in almost all the roads and establishments in our country.
Wherever you go, there is no place without CCTV.
>> CORRECT
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>> Wherever you go, there\'s always CCTV.
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