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Q: How did your family influence you as a person?
A: I think they influenced my basic personality or characteristics.
When I was a kid, I couldn\'t socialize with many people, and I only had my family who could influence my personality.
Also, I think it was mostly my family who made me make some right decisions and go to the right way.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. When I was a kid, I couldn\'t socialize with many people, and I only had my family who could influence my personality.
3. Also, I think it was mostly my family who made me make some right decisions and go to the right way.
Thank you for your answers!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. I think they influenced my basic personality or characteristics.
>>CORRECT!
2. When I was a kid, I couldn\'t socialize with many people, and I only had my family who could influence my personality.
>> When I was a kid, I couldn\'t socialize with many people, so I only had my family to influence my personality.
3. Also, I think it was mostly my family who made me make some right decisions and go to the right way.
>>CORRECT!
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