Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
The advantages are I don\'t need to waste time to choose cloth what I wear and I can show I am student and I can feel I belong to school and class.
The disadvantages are a school uniform can be uncomfortable and students may think its design is ugly. And student can\'t wear what they want.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Henry!
Thanks for sharing! It\'s convenient not having to choose clothes and feeling a sense of belonging. However, comfort and personal style can be concerns.
~ Teacher Maxine
The advantages are I don\'t need to waste time to choose cloth what I wear and I can show I am student and I can feel I belong to school and class.
>> The advantages are that I don\'t need to waste time choosing what clothes to wear, I can show that I am a student, and I can feel that I belong to my school and class.
The disadvantages are a school uniform can be uncomfortable and students may think its design is ugly. And student can\'t wear what they want.
>> The disadvantages are that a school uniform can be uncomfortable, students may find its design ugly, and they can\'t wear what they want.
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