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I don\'t know exactly why there are so many flowers.
planted in these three countries, but I think it is because
the technology to grow flowers has developed a lot.
Also, flowers symbolize the country.
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Why do you think that there are many flowers planted in some countries like the Netherlands, Ecuador, or Columbia?
I don\'t know exactly why there are so many flowers.
planted in these three countries, but I think it is because
the technology to grow flowers has developed a lot.
>> OR: I can\'t say for sure but I suppose these countries have developed and mastered the technology for the flower industry.
Also, flowers symbolize the country.
>> OR: Another thing is that some flowers symbolize these countries.
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