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2024-03-01 · 첨삭 강사 Khai

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I usually sleep well. Maybe it\'s because I usually move my body a lot or exercise to make my body tired. Moderate exercise is helpful to sleep well. Sometimes I can\'t sleep. For example, when I drink coffee late at night, when I have stress, or when I have too much thoughts. When that happens, I don\'t try too hard to fall asleep, but when I still can\'t sleep, I sometimes make food for tomorrow in the kitchen, or I fall asleep while watching YouTube in a lying position.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for sharing what you do in this situation. It’s good that you usually sleep well. Well done, Mia. ^^

-Khai

I usually sleep well.

>> CORRECT

Maybe it\'s because I usually move my body a lot or exercise to make my body tired.

>> CORRECT
OR
>> I think the reason for this is that I usually move my body a lot or exercise to make my body tired.

Moderate exercise is helpful to sleep well.

>> Moderate exercise is helpful for sleeping well.

Sometimes I can\'t sleep.

>> CORRECT
OR
>> Sometimes, I don’t fall asleep easily.

For example, when I drink coffee late at night, when I have stress, or when I have too much thoughts.

>> It happens when I drink coffee late at night, when I have stress, or when I have too many thoughts.
When that happens, I don\'t try too hard to fall asleep, but when I still can\'t sleep, I sometimes make food for tomorrow in the kitchen, or I fall asleep while watching YouTube in a lying position.
When that happens, I don\'t try too hard to fall asleep, but when I still can\'t sleep, I sometimes make food for tomorrow in the kitchen, or I fall asleep while watching YouTube in a lying position.

>> CORRECT

>> I don\'t try too hard to fall asleep. I will do other things, such as prepare food for the next day or watch YouTube, and eventually fall asleep.

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