Homework
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Q: How did your friends influence you as a person?
A: I think they influenced my information.
I think my basic personality was influence by my family, and the information that I have right now was influenced by my friends.
I think they also influenced my personality tamporarily.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. I think my basic personality was influence by my family, and the information that I have right now was influenced by my friends.
3. I think they also influenced my personality tamporarily.
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~T. Divina^^
Here are some considerations:
1. I think they influenced my information.
>>I think they influenced my knowledge about things.
2. I think my basic personality was influence by my family, and the information that I have right now was influenced by my friends.
>>I think my basic personality was influenced by my family, and the information that I have right now was influenced by my friends.
3. I think they also influenced my personality tamporarily.
>> I think they also influenced my personality temporarily.
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