Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. My favorite season is fall. This is because fall is cool weather, so it is good to stay and travel around.
2. My influence on me is that I can have a good time living in pretty clothes.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ji[이름]!
That sounds wonderful! Fall is indeed a beautiful season for enjoying the cool weather and traveling around.
~ Teacher Maxine
My favorite season is fall.
>> CORRECT!
This is because fall is cool weather, so it is good to stay and travel around.
>> This is because fall brings cool weather, making it enjoyable for staying outdoors and traveling around.
My influence on me is that I can have a good time living in pretty clothes.
>> The influence of pretty clothes on me is that they allow me to have a good time and feel confident.
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