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I agree with Eleanor\'s opinion because I don\'t want to worry what I wear. A school uniform can make the worry disappear.
I think students should wear school uniforms because it show who is student and students may not be compared based on their clothes
강사 첨삭
Hello, Henry!
I understand your perspective. School uniforms indeed alleviate the stress of deciding what to wear and can promote a sense of equality among students.
~ Teacher Maxine
I agree with Eleanor\'s opinion because I don\'t want to worry what I wear.
>> CORRECT!
OR I concur with Eleanor\'s viewpoint because I prefer not to concern myself with what I wear.
A school uniform can make the worry disappear.
>> CORRECT!
I think students should wear school uniforms because it show who is student, and students may not be compared based on their clothes
>> I think students should wear school uniforms because it shows who is a student, and students may not be compared based on their clothes.
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