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I didn\'t have the most boring holiday in Korea, but I couldn\'t sleep at my grandmother\'s house.
And there are days when I didn\'t eat dinner.
Also, I forgot to bring a board game.
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Write about the most boring holiday in Korea.
I didn\'t have the most boring holiday in Korea, but I couldn\'t sleep at my grandmother\'s house.
>> OR: Holidays are always fun for me, but I couldn\'t sleep at my grandma\'s last holiday.
And there are days when I didn\'t eat dinner.
>> And there were days when I didn\'t eat dinner.
Also, I forgot to bring a board game.
>> OR: In addition, I even forgot to bring board games.
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