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Q: What are the pros and cons of public transportation?
A: I think pros are reduce of gas.
If people always use their own cars, it would make a lot of gas that will pollute the air, and it will harm people.
I think the cons are it only goes appointed roads, so it would take a little bit more time.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. If people always use their own cars, it would make a lot of gas that will pollute the air, and it will harm people.
3. I think the cons are it only goes appointed roads, so it would take a little bit more time.
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Here are some notes:
1. I think pros are reduce of gas.
>>I think one of the pros is the reduction of gas.
2. If people always use their own cars, it would make a lot of gas that will pollute the air, and it will harm people.
>>If people always use their own cars, it will produce a lot of gas that will pollute the air, and it will harm people.
3. I think the cons are it only goes appointed roads, so it would take a little bit more time.
>>I think the con is it only goes to its appointed roads, so it would take a little bit more time.
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