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I agree with Dylan\'s opinion. Because if there are only boys in school I can play with them very fun without distraction of the girl
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Hello, Henry!
That\'s an interesting perspective. Thanks for sharing! It\'s also important to value diversity and learn to work well with all classmates, regardless of gender.
~ Teacher Maxine
I agree with Dylan\'s opinion. Because if there are only boys in school I can play with them very fun without distraction of the girl
>> I agree with Dylan\'s opinion because if there are only boys in school, I can have a lot of fun playing with them without the distraction of girls.
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